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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 4, 2010 8:33:54 GMT
Love the bits I just caught up about Isabo and Bastian and can't wait to see what's up with Rashid and Astrid now...
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Post by doris on Oct 4, 2010 9:02:35 GMT
I have amended the end of part 2 a bit to make it fit better with Mia's side. Will post the start of part 4 in a bit, to see what Cherie thinks, to make sure it fits in with her bits abut Rashid and Astrid
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 4, 2010 9:04:48 GMT
I hope it goes up soon cos I can't wait to read more and later I'll be putting the next one or maybe two parts of anya's story...she's going to learn about mia being missing, the truth about jacen and might have to tell a couple of her own secrets too...
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Post by doris on Oct 4, 2010 9:12:25 GMT
doing it now...
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Post by doris on Oct 4, 2010 9:20:50 GMT
it's up, only a short bit. Hope this works with yours Cherie, if not I can change things. Can't wait to see what the next bit of yours is Cherie. I am itching to finish writing Rashid's secret. Astrid will have a lot to process!
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 4, 2010 9:23:08 GMT
OOoooh! I need more! This is awesome Doris...who is 'she'? does she pose a threat to anyone else or just Rashid? I NEED TO KNOW!!!
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Post by doris on Oct 4, 2010 9:27:41 GMT
lol, glad you like it.... And wait and see...  |
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Post by cherie on Oct 4, 2010 10:21:23 GMT
I will work on that bit at lunch and get it up asap! Also i hope the interaction with Anya and Bastian worked for you! I can change what ever needs to be done!
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 4, 2010 10:30:26 GMT
It worked fine Cherie :-) I loved the thoughts Bastian had about Jacen and Anya's relationship too, they made me smile!
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Post by cherie on Oct 4, 2010 11:45:04 GMT
Doris! Typing right now - 20 mins and i should be done! Its only a short section but hopefully will work!
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Post by cherie on Oct 4, 2010 11:46:33 GMT
Oh I am glad Michelle! Its worrying taking over someone elses character, i was worried i hadn't got her right  |
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Post by doris on Oct 4, 2010 11:51:09 GMT
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Post by cherie on Oct 4, 2010 12:25:34 GMT
Isabo part 3.5 up - let me know what ya'll think
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Post by doris on Oct 4, 2010 12:39:33 GMT
I am hopping with excitement here, this is brilliant Cherie! :)I can so work with this x
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 4, 2010 12:50:35 GMT
I love it!!! So many twists and turns...this is so good!
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Post by cherie on Oct 4, 2010 13:07:12 GMT
oh yay! Phew was concerned! But i feel a high five coming on!!!
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Post by rosered on Oct 4, 2010 15:10:57 GMT
My goodness you have been busy! I think Willow is going to be standalone partly cause I only have limited writing (reading message boards!) time but also because it fits her. Hope that's ok?Hope my first part is ok too...
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 4, 2010 15:11:12 GMT
Whoooo Rosered that is a great opening....I can't wait to see how her fantasy pans out :-)
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Post by rosered on Oct 4, 2010 15:20:14 GMT
Thank you (breathes sigh of relief!)
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 4, 2010 15:23:02 GMT
Why you sighing with relief? It fits perfectly with what we've been doing :-)
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Post by cherie on Oct 4, 2010 15:24:31 GMT
WOW! the start of Willows story is great!!! Rock on!
If you don't mind...i thought i might amend my first bit (isabo's story) and have her wonder if Willow had arrived yet or was still stuck in the office - just a little throw away bit, but kind brings you in a bit more and still leaves Willow out as a stand alone character??
Let me know what you think
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Post by doris on Oct 4, 2010 15:28:14 GMT
Great stuff about Willow Love the name btw!!! I have added some more to Astrid's part 4, to tie in with Cherie. I feel a showdown coming up between Isabo and Rashid at some point Cherie, what do you reckon? |
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Post by cherie on Oct 4, 2010 15:30:48 GMT
I will have a look and of course, cant have sworn enemies on the same island without a little tension! ;D
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Post by cherie on Oct 4, 2010 15:40:52 GMT
Doris! just read the bit.......matches perfectly! OOoooh i smell trouble!
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Post by doris on Oct 4, 2010 15:43:13 GMT
lol yep me too. I plan for Astrrid and him to have an allmighty ding dong and him to walk off leaving her to cool down, so who knows what may happen after that. Will try and get that bit up tonight when kids are in bed.
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Post by rosered on Oct 4, 2010 15:45:55 GMT
Cherie, that would be great - it all fit in time line wise on Fri when I wrote it, didn't realise you would all be so uber productive over the weekend while I was organising parties and smearing cakes with more butter icing than an heart can safely take...
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Post by cherie on Oct 4, 2010 15:48:51 GMT
dont worry it still does perfectly and i am sure the others will be happy to make mention of your characters - especially has you are writting one of Christophe's boys. You don't have to have full contact with the others if you don't want but i have a couple of places i can merge and there is still loads left to do so i am sure we will all cross paths at some point!! |
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Post by doris on Oct 4, 2010 18:36:21 GMT
Part 4 of Astrid's story is up now in its entirety. Don't know who I feel more sorry for right now Rashid or Astrid...
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Post by rosered on Oct 4, 2010 19:26:37 GMT
Thanks Cherie, nice set up and now it all works time wise. Brilliant!
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Post by doris on Oct 4, 2010 19:37:37 GMT
Loving part two of Willow's story |
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