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Post by cherie on Oct 3, 2010 10:27:44 GMT
this is so exciting! And i can't way to hear your ideas for the next book!  Also errr they might be about the desecrate the transmitter room! sorry!!!!  |
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Post by cherie on Oct 3, 2010 12:14:00 GMT
Part 2 is now up! Let me know what you think! I will start working on part three once you guys are happy. I will also make sure that it includes a little helping hand for Mia's kidnap!
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Post by doris on Oct 3, 2010 12:47:35 GMT
Oh my Cherie, you go girl. This is brilliant :-)
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Post by joanne on Oct 3, 2010 12:48:31 GMT
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT. You really have set up a cracking pace with this. Its momentum is going like mad and I can't wait to read on. WE are all Brilliant.
When I get back , if Michelle agrees (seeing as she is 'ther boss' ) I'll set out how I think book 2 should go.... similar but very very different. However, we need to get book one to a brilliant conclusion first.
A bit of info. Dylans house is on the far side of the island and there is a protected circle thanks to Christophe around it. However Bastian as he is what he is has no problem with that, even if Dylan hadn't asked for help.
Roll on the next parts.
Wonder who else is joining our ladies and gents on their journeys??
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Post by cherie on Oct 3, 2010 14:52:14 GMT
Phew!! Thanks guys!! Apologies again for using the transmitting room for such unbecoming behaviour:o
Joanne look forward to seeing the.next plan!!!
I am not.going to include the actual kidnapping but will do the lead up and the after just like when the boat went down of that works. I Am also conscious of not having had anya or astrid visit at all so I will be working on a little cameo if that works Michelle/Doris?
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 3, 2010 14:57:55 GMT
I love it Cherie! What did you have in mind for Anya's cameo
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Post by cherie on Oct 3, 2010 15:06:01 GMT
Not sure yet to be honest so if you have any suggestions that will work with your.chapter let me know and i will work that in.
Maybe something long the lines of passing in the gardens or something but like I said not.sure yet so am truly open to suggestions ;D
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 3, 2010 15:09:07 GMT
I think I have a great way for them to interact if you'll indulge me...Anya is lost after running away from Jacen and Bastian can find her wandering she has a few things she wants to say then he'll go and see Jacen and when jace is done with him he'll be free to be wherever he's needed next. That sound ok?
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Post by cherie on Oct 3, 2010 15:12:45 GMT
Yes, he is going to have to go awol for a bit from isabo, well after what he is about to do I would high tail it too.....
So that will work perfectly.
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 3, 2010 15:13:32 GMT
Great! Just tell me when I can post it then :-)
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Post by cherie on Oct 3, 2010 15:16:46 GMT
When ever you are ready!!
Ok let me just check, you include it from her point of view in yours and I can do it from his in mine??? Does that work or would you prefer something different??
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 3, 2010 15:18:21 GMT
We can do it that way. I'll message you the plan I have and you can see what you think :-)
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Post by doris on Oct 3, 2010 15:20:01 GMT
Cameo is fine. I am thinking Rashid and Astrid will help go looking for Anya and stumble on Isabo and perhaps Bastian too. I need something to happen to Rashid, he will get hurt, but heal really quickly and make Astrid wander what the hell is going on. I ma toying with involving Bastian in this. Not sure what exactly yet. Would that work?
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Post by joanne on Oct 3, 2010 15:24:48 GMT
i am very nearly on my way... but maybe Rashid could get hurt by stumbling into the protected circle around Dylans house. That way it could heal quickly cos its imaginary? temporary? a bit hazy here. Will look forward to what you all write. Dont forget MIa missing as well!!
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Post by cherie on Oct 3, 2010 15:25:22 GMT
Michelle that's cool, can this get anymore fun!?
Doris do.you want to hurt him (seriously that didn't sound as bad in my head) send him to me to help heal and I will send him/them back? Just a thought let me know what you think
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 3, 2010 15:27:47 GMT
Mia going missing can be hinted at in my next part and made clearer in the part after that...I hav two short bits in mind at the min!!!
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Post by joanne on Oct 3, 2010 15:29:37 GMT
I MUST GET OFF THIS COMPUTER AND PUT SOME SLAP ON!! SERIOUS FACE MAKING GOOD NEEDED LOL REALLY TRULY BYE ALL TIL TUESDAY. LOOKINH FORWARD TO A REAL GOOD READ WHEN I GET BACK X
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Post by cherie on Oct 3, 2010 15:31:42 GMT
Have fun joanne!!!!
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Post by doris on Oct 3, 2010 15:31:56 GMT
Lol, Cherie, yes he will get hurt, but he won't need healing, he can do that himself. Perhaps Isabo can sense he is different? He is immortal btw, ok giving the game away here, sorry.
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Post by doris on Oct 3, 2010 15:33:25 GMT
see you soon Joanne x
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 3, 2010 15:34:17 GMT
Bye Joanne we'll miss you! Hurry back!!!!
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Post by cherie on Oct 3, 2010 15:46:30 GMT
Oooo I.do like a good immortal.Doris!! So I.can work.something and let you see so you are happy ok?
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Post by doris on Oct 3, 2010 15:52:03 GMT
sounds great :-)
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Post by cherie on Oct 3, 2010 16:09:11 GMT
Looks good.Michelle I can work with that lovely wool post as soon as I have more
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 3, 2010 16:11:58 GMT
:-) Great Cherie. I can't wait to see Bastian's side of it and what's next for him and Isabo.
This is so much fun! I love how many twists and turns we're using.
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Post by cherie on Oct 3, 2010 18:24:06 GMT
Isabo part 3 is up - hope you think it ties in well with your michelle!
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Post by doris on Oct 3, 2010 18:43:40 GMT
Loving this Cherie  |
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Post by cherie on Oct 3, 2010 19:12:52 GMT
Working on our cameo witch will be up tomorrow
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Post by doris on Oct 3, 2010 19:20:13 GMT
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Post by doris on Oct 3, 2010 20:13:22 GMT
Cherie, I just sent you a pm re story line. Hope it ties with yours
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