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Post by cherie on Oct 2, 2010 12:02:36 GMT
oooh i like that Doris! I think as a whole ladies we are getting some really good stories down!
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Post by joanne on Oct 2, 2010 12:12:19 GMT
We are. I keep reading whart every one else has written and not writing... but part 3 will be up today, and you can all tell me if its OK. I really am enjoyimg myself here!
Anything you want me to include just let me know.
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Post by joanne on Oct 2, 2010 14:08:39 GMT
oh yes... I can't wait.....
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Post by joanne on Oct 2, 2010 16:53:34 GMT
Modified chapter 3 is up!!
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Post by doris on Oct 2, 2010 17:01:19 GMT
Love it Joanne! I will have to change my ending slightly, and then it will fit even better. But Oh my goodness, what is Mia going to do to Jacen now. Michelle, your bit had me going for a while until I figured out that Destin was Jacen. BRILL!
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Post by joanne on Oct 2, 2010 17:15:51 GMT
have you figured out that Jacen and DYlan are brothers? ha ha . S othat makes Christophe BOTH their fathers. Was Astrids wee mention OK? Dying to find out what happens next to her and rashid!
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Post by doris on Oct 2, 2010 17:19:42 GMT
Astrid's mention was perfect! She def has enough of her own emotion to deal with lol.
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Post by cherie on Oct 2, 2010 17:27:00 GMT
Hay ladies have added the rest of the first bit of Isabo's story. I have left it at the point where they are heading off to the transitting centre and will pick it up after Mia lays out Jace if that works for you guys! Let me know if you guys are ok with that!
Wow! Have read all the bits so far and i am freaking out not know what is going to happen next with the other stories! Joanne your bit with Isabo and Bastian fitted in perfectly thank you!
Let me know what you think! I am happy to rewrite any and everything!
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Post by joanne on Oct 2, 2010 18:21:41 GMT
no re writing necessary. It's amazing how we all seem to follow each other. M & B TAKE NOTE WE RULE!!!
BTW I really need more than 2,500 words to finish. Pretty please can I have a few more?
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Post by doris on Oct 2, 2010 18:51:43 GMT
btw how many nights are we covering , all week or are we leaving early?
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Post by joanne on Oct 2, 2010 18:58:23 GMT
up to you.... I'm going to have to have Mia brooding for a few nights, if i want to cover the whole week. Yhink i've got a bit carried away! Tho she needs to have words with Jacen after night " !! ha ha. She is a ball buster !
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Post by cherie on Oct 2, 2010 19:34:03 GMT
I think to total was increased to 20,000 are you close to that??
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Post by doris on Oct 2, 2010 19:37:21 GMT
isn't she just! Great character! Ok will cover the week then, think Astrid and Rashid will have to do some brooding too and I wouldn't like to be Christophe or Dylan. Is it ok if I borrow Dylan for a a showdown with a very irate Rashid? Probably the morning after night two? Could be later, let me know if that would work with your story line please.
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Post by joanne on Oct 2, 2010 19:53:41 GMT
It was me that said 20,000 tho don't think michelle said yes!!
And feel free to borrow Dylan. MIa is totally fed up with him!! and her next mix with Jacen... well i wouldn't like to be him!!
I'm on about 8,000 at the mo but need more than 2,000 to really sort them al out before I do the LAST SUMMING UP!!! god my typing is crap!
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Post by joanne on Oct 2, 2010 19:57:16 GMT
Actually night 2 would be perfect. Jeaen is going to Mia in th morning of day three_ (if Michelle agrees) to be VERY VERY humble. So for DYlan and RAshid to have a stramash the night before wqould be great. I will wait for you to put that up before i go on. Mind you as from tomorrow lunch, I am gpoing to be a corporate wife... Hope they haver free wi fi at the hotel!!!
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Post by cherie on Oct 2, 2010 20:09:42 GMT
Ohhh Eeek! I can let you have the spare from mine if it helps. Bit like excess baggage at the airport if you are over but your mate ain't you even out. If that makes sense?? Not sure what will be left but will let you know when I do  |
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Post by doris on Oct 2, 2010 20:35:24 GMT
ok, morning of night two it is then  Best get on with writing now then, youngest little whirlwind is finally snoring! |
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Post by joanne on Oct 2, 2010 20:56:19 GMT
Dear Cherie, now it maybe excess of alcohol., but no it makes no sense whatsoever!!! LOL
are you talking about words. Cos I bet you need them. Bastian is going to go wild and Isabo to pull him in!! and wait for Mia to finally sort DYlan out . Whew!! please Michelle let me have more words!!
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Post by doris on Oct 2, 2010 23:09:52 GMT
the next bit of Astrid's story is up, still need to add more, but I know you wanted the bit with Rashid and Dylan, so there you go |
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 3, 2010 4:20:54 GMT
Okay, how about we remove the word limit totally and can just write what we want - some can write the whole week (because I love this story so much I'm too addicted to stop) - others can just write their fantasy part?
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Post by joanne on Oct 3, 2010 5:23:20 GMT
Great idea. BTW can We have it that when Anya goes to try and find MIa, she can't. BEcause at the moment, Dylan is working on 'kidnapping her, and taking her to his cottage on the far side of the island! Telling her that as she wanted his fantasy, she is going to get it!
Though I think we must stop at the end of the week. A, because otherwise we will all ramble on for ever, b, we need to get a good ending sorted and C, I've got a great idea for the next book in the Fantasy island series. Oh and another character for this one maybe?
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Post by joanne on Oct 3, 2010 5:47:55 GMT
CHAPTER 4 IS UP. Short and sweet because, i just want a bit of feedback, before i go on to my last parts. THat's where Dylan kidnaps her for his fantasy.
Have I meshed enough of everyone else in? Cherie I would love for Isabo to see them as Dylan takes Mia way. Do you think Bastian could haver a hand in it... Something unusual, that DYlan had forgotten BAstian could do? And Isabo could see it and be miffed that he is helping Dylan, but not her? or something. I feel I've not given her the attention she deserves!
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Post by cherie on Oct 3, 2010 7:57:09 GMT
That sounds good to me. Seems Bastion has got magic from somewhere so maybe he can send her to sleep and when she wakes up Dylan has kidnapped her, but happy of you have other plans. Isabo doesn't seem to be the type to volunteer but is happy to help wherever she is needed so feel free to use her as much or as little as you want. Just let me know so I can work with it  |
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Post by joanne on Oct 3, 2010 8:04:32 GMT
if he is a tiger shifter, maybe a tiger to carry her to Dylans cottage? Then she wouldn't know fact from fantasy? Won't get on to last part til tuesday. BUt I see her going to her pool, not getting there, due to bastians intervention, and when she is put down in the cottage. No one there, just a not saying and next??
then Dylan enters and says as she wanted his fantasy she is getting it>
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Post by joanne on Oct 3, 2010 8:12:03 GMT
BTW that would be in the middle of noght 2. So after Anya cant find her on day three, by day 4 can we have people trying to find her, and Jacen (cos he doesn't want a bollocking and has a fair idea where she might be antway)Christophe and Bastian (who are in on it) stopping them?
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Post by cherie on Oct 3, 2010 8:42:02 GMT
actually that would lead nicely into another little arguement i have planned for Isabo and Bastian. Really these men are sooooo interfering i tell ya!
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Post by joanne on Oct 3, 2010 8:45:25 GMT
goodie.. getting better and better. Was part 4 OK?
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Post by cherie on Oct 3, 2010 9:32:31 GMT
I have finished reading all the other new section and have had to pick up my jaw from the ground! You ladies are good i tell ya! l now i am going to have to pick up my game just so i don't drag the rest of you down!! Rock on ladies  |
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Post by joanne on Oct 3, 2010 10:11:20 GMT
you wont i promise. I love the way you are going with them. wish my imagination was as good. Though i am getting a few twitches about Christophe!!
Dont know how you feel, but the more we write the more fluid and fluent we are. I think its cos the pressure is off and this is for fun!
Also ( whoops this is deep for a sunday morning) In not having to decide on a genre and totally sticking to it helps. I never thought i could write in the manner I am doing so....THANK YOU LADIES!!!
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Post by doris on Oct 3, 2010 10:12:16 GMT
Part four is great Joanne, this is coming together nicely. The mention of Astrid and Rashid's troubles was spot on. Love the idea of the kidnapping. Can Rashid be involved in looking for her? He is going to have a hard time redeeming himself and he has a big secret that will have to come out at some point. Just to keep things interesting |
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Best get on with writing now then, youngest little whirlwind is finally snoring!
