Willow's story

[rosered]

Hello All,

My goodness you have been busy! Since I last checked in on Fri it's come on leaps and bounds well done - plus there are all kinds of worlds and fantasies colliding... not sure I will be able to do that cause of time and planned story arc but as this thing has a life of it's own who knows?
OK - Willow, old school friend of Anya's complete workaholic and control freak is about to be swept off her feet by Luka, youngest son of Christophe who has been desk clerking at the island whilst saving up to do a PhD (I think) he has also been reluctant man in beeches in a hands off capacity as he is not a gigolo (he reminds himself every time some rich woman goggles at his breeches) only for hings to get a bit out of control with Willow.
Never written anything even vaguely steamy as yet, think this may be a good place to try, honest criticism please!

[cherie]

welcome! what a start! we kinda run with the rule that there are no rules so do as much or as little as you want! Oh the only rule we do have is HAVE FUN!! don't worry about form, or grammer or anything, just let the words flow..................its great practice for all your more serious writing!

[michelle handyside]

It's exactly as Cherie says, the reason for this is just to keep writing and seeing if we can inspire each other and work around a few things.

So Luka is Jacen and Dylan's little brother? Wonder what he's going to make of their lovelives and the complexities of them! Does that mean he has a few 'talents' of his own?

[doris]

I can only echo Cherie and Michelle, a great start. Can't wait to see what happens next and yep, this will fit right in

[cherie]

I have amended the first part of Isabo's first bit - just a brief mention - hope thats ok - let me know

[rosered]

Hi, it's perfect, thank you!

[cherie]

Part 2 of willows.story is great!!!!

[rosered]

Part 3 is up...

[michelle handyside]

Just red it and I love it!! Does Luca have his own powers too?

[doris]

beautifully written

[cherie]

Very cool

[rosered]

Thank you ladies! Luka is being borrowed by Cherie so goodness knows what will happen to the spoilt, handsome boy! Either he has no powers as the youngest OR he is rejecting them to live in the normal world, not sure yet...

[joanne]

well......

[rosered]

Be nice to him, I think I have a bit of a crush...

[joanne]

well ok then.... night x

[cherie]

I am? Oh dear did i have a 32 year old senior moment again? But thinking on it i could use him with Alex, a little plotting and their ladies..oooooooooooo *rubs hands in evil fashion*

[joanne]

do we all realise it is sooo frustrating to read some of these comments and wonder what the hell they are all aboyt LOL thats my nosiness coming out!!

[michelle handyside]

I want to know what's in store too! It keeps me going during my nightshift checking to see if anyone's added more.