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Post by cherie on Oct 2, 2010 10:47:56 GMT
Hi All, A small section of Isabo's story is up for you guys to have a look at. Its the start but i wanted you guys to make sure you are happy with the direction I am basically going in. Also any and all comments are more than welcome! Somehow i managed to add it twice and can't for the life of me figure out how to delete the first one! (embarrasing for an IT manager I can tell ya)  Hope you guys like it! |
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 2, 2010 10:49:51 GMT
No probs Cherie I'll see what I can do for you about the doubling.
I can't wait to see what you've written...and see if we finally meet the mysterious Bastian!!
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Post by cherie on Oct 2, 2010 10:51:05 GMT
Thanks Michelle!! Phew!
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Post by joanne on Oct 2, 2010 10:53:04 GMT
this is meaty, and fits in BRILLIANTLY. so good to have a new direction as well. I had just put Bastian into a scene in the middle of the first night, where ,they are waiting for Anya and Jacen to be rescued. Hes in the transmitter room with Dylan and Mia. Is that OK or do you want me to take him out? I can do easily, or I can have isabo turn up looking for him cos hes left her?
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 2, 2010 10:56:34 GMT
I LOVE the feel of this Cherie, you definitely can continue with this and I want to read more! A tiger shifter, no wonder that Mia only caught a glance of his shadow...Mr Destin E was more than happy to employ a man with his capabilities I can assure you! :-)
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Post by cherie on Oct 2, 2010 11:02:28 GMT
that is actually perfect and you can use him how ever you like (please return him unharmed;) )
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 2, 2010 11:06:12 GMT
Oh I'm not promising that ;-)
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Post by doris on Oct 2, 2010 11:40:28 GMT
oh that is brilliant!!!!
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Post by joanne on Oct 2, 2010 11:50:16 GMT
He will be returned perfect in every way...
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Post by cherie on Oct 2, 2010 12:04:20 GMT
Thank you ladies after ll can't have him worn out before Isabo gets her vengful hands on him! Let me know if you include her too so i can work with that!
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Post by joanne on Oct 2, 2010 12:10:13 GMT
Could she have followed him to the transmitter room? And Mia can ask her if she thinks Bastain is a bit weird? She couls say "well of course he is. "
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Post by cherie on Oct 2, 2010 14:09:59 GMT
sounds good Joanne. When are they in the transmitter room? First night?
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Post by joanne on Oct 2, 2010 14:27:06 GMT
Yes, its posted but when i get back from the dreaded shopping, i'll amend a bit and put her in. Good!!!
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Post by cherie on Oct 2, 2010 14:29:02 GMT
just seen it! looks good. you have portrayed Bastian perfectly!  |
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Post by joanne on Oct 2, 2010 16:53:11 GMT
Have posted up my modified ch 3 with Isabo in it. What do you think? its only a 'camneo' but ties her in with Bastian....
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Post by cherie on Oct 2, 2010 17:28:12 GMT
Joanne, its actually perfect and ties in the amened first bit i did for them which i have just posted!!!
Let me know if the end works for you in mine.
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Post by joanne on Oct 2, 2010 17:48:08 GMT
spot on !! we rule we rock we are the greatest!!!!! yes!
getting very excited ladies.....
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Post by cherie on Oct 2, 2010 17:53:52 GMT
excellent!! I shall get straight into writing section 2 for isabo asap!
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Post by cherie on Oct 3, 2010 12:12:43 GMT
Part 2 is up! Let me know what you think!
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Post by doris on Oct 3, 2010 12:48:22 GMT
loved it!
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Post by cherie on Oct 4, 2010 12:25:49 GMT
Pat 3.5 up!
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Post by cherie on Oct 6, 2010 9:33:37 GMT
Isabo's duff duff moment is now up!
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Post by joanne on Oct 6, 2010 9:38:51 GMT
it is amazing... I have so much to work with. Am just about to post my final bit of book one
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 6, 2010 9:45:30 GMT
I love it Cherie, just what we need an irate mum in law to go with the irate mum mia is! These guys are NEVER going to survive all this unscathed are they???
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Post by cherie on Oct 6, 2010 9:47:20 GMT
I thought she might need a little company - someone who understands annoying son in laws!  |
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Post by doris on Oct 6, 2010 10:11:48 GMT
love, love love it!!!
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Post by cherie on Oct 6, 2010 10:13:16 GMT
thanking you muchly
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Post by cherie on Oct 8, 2010 6:26:01 GMT
Book 2 is now started. Hope it ties in with you you guys did
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Post by doris on Oct 8, 2010 8:37:49 GMT
great stuff Cherie x
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