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Post by doris on Oct 1, 2010 13:52:12 GMT
The first part of Astrid's story is up now. Let me know what you think please. I think you can see where I am going with this.
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 1, 2010 13:57:01 GMT
I really enjoyed reading this Doris. I love the 'mentally sticking her tongue out' who hasn't done that :-) I want to read more!!
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Post by joanne on Oct 1, 2010 14:01:40 GMT
Can I borrow her for an accidental meeting with Mia,on the way to the beach, in the dark?
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Post by doris on Oct 1, 2010 14:02:55 GMT
of course you can, sounds great  |
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Post by cherie on Oct 1, 2010 14:27:02 GMT
Ooo just read Astrid's story, rock on i really enjoyed it!
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Post by doris on Oct 1, 2010 19:15:49 GMT
start of the next part is up now
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 2, 2010 9:01:45 GMT
Loving it Doris!! I can't wait to see what's coming next. :-)
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Post by doris on Oct 2, 2010 23:12:01 GMT
start of part three is up. Rashid is not a man to be messed with!
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Post by doris on Oct 3, 2010 2:18:15 GMT
all of part three is up now. phew. I can go to bed!
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Post by joanne on Oct 3, 2010 4:20:18 GMT
This is moving brilliantly. I love the way you've woven Dylan in. I've just got to live up to all these plots and sub plots in my part 4. He wont be getting much sleep!
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Post by doris on Oct 4, 2010 9:21:42 GMT
The start of Astrid's part 4 is up now. Hope it works...
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Post by cherie on Oct 4, 2010 12:24:57 GMT
very nice! Hope you are ok with what i did! Let me know if its not the right feel or what you were going for and i will change it !
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Post by doris on Oct 4, 2010 12:41:15 GMT
Cherie, this is spot on. I shall write this from Astrid's and Rashid's pov now and carry on. Whoop, whoop!  |
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Post by doris on Oct 4, 2010 18:37:47 GMT
Part 4 is all up now!
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Post by rosered on Oct 4, 2010 19:37:27 GMT
I really enjoyed it - you and Cherie have done brilliantly weaving your stories together!
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Post by cherie on Oct 4, 2010 19:59:30 GMT
Rock on rose!!! That was great
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Post by doris on Oct 5, 2010 22:45:02 GMT
Next part of Astrid is up. Hope I got Isabo and Bastian right Cherie and this works for you. If not, let me know and I change it. Brief mention of Dylan in there too . Hope it all works.
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