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Post by joanne on Oct 1, 2010 10:34:45 GMT
 Hi all , well that's my chapter up. Yes It does stop abruptly, I needed it to be a 'what happens next ending' which I will draw together later. IE I might need to do another 1/2 chapter later.. or maybe not and It will just be resolved in my summing up( most likely) Feedback please... i have the handkies ready  I will say, whatever anyonre else thinks of it, I had a great time writing it, and really enjoyed myself. And lets face it thats the first step isn't it.
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 1, 2010 10:37:56 GMT
Ooooh I'm going to read it right now!
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Post by doris on Oct 1, 2010 10:51:58 GMT
Well. I LOVED it, had me chuckling along. But you can't end it there!!!  |
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Post by joanne on Oct 1, 2010 10:52:04 GMT
oops posted it more than once.. now sorted I hope. I need feedback honest and truthful, as I really have no idea whether it is ok or not. I think that is one of the reasons I stopped where I did. I get carried away when I write
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Post by cherie on Oct 1, 2010 14:23:51 GMT
Two words for you Joanne - LOVED IT!! ;D
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Post by joanne on Oct 1, 2010 17:11:02 GMT
PART 2 IS READY FOR YOUR COMMENTS!! -but am I .YES I am... I'm .loving it! Never really written like this before so I need all the comments I can get.
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Post by doris on Oct 1, 2010 18:10:59 GMT
well, i am too busy fanning myself to comment ;-)
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Post by joanne on Oct 1, 2010 18:15:34 GMT
Take it you like it then?
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Post by doris on Oct 1, 2010 18:19:02 GMT
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 1, 2010 18:20:58 GMT
I say score one for the older woman! Well done Joanne :-)
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Post by doris on Oct 1, 2010 18:21:13 GMT
oh and which night is Astrid going to bump into Mia? I will have to leave a space for it in my story.
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Post by joanne on Oct 1, 2010 19:03:51 GMT
B. site deserted me! anyway to recap.... Tonight(well the first night.) Christophe tells Dylan that they A and Mr D are missing and Mia overhears. Cue VERY loud noises that get Astrid and others out of their rooms to find out what is going on. Does she have someone with her? up to you. And if she is not in her room can you tell me where she is so I can incorporate it? big thanks J x
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Post by doris on Oct 1, 2010 19:17:22 GMT
hmm see my story she was kinda busy that night. lol Too busy to hear anything I am afraid.
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Post by joanne on Oct 2, 2010 13:15:25 GMT
Chapter 3 is now up.. thats me til at least tuesday. Which is good cos i'll be able to weave all the other threads in that I need too.
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 2, 2010 13:22:59 GMT
Oh Joanne that is classic!! I love what you've done but it's a shame you can't do more til Tuesday.... I'm almost ready to put Anya's bit up :-)
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Post by joanne on Oct 2, 2010 13:27:48 GMT
well i may get a bit more done... Basically Mia is going to ingnore Dylan, not really speak to anyone for a couple of days, til Dylan looses his cool. Finds her, drags her to a secluded cabin, and tells her, that as she wanted his fantasy, she is going to get it!!
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Post by joanne on Oct 2, 2010 13:29:04 GMT
And please put Anya's bit up. Such a shame we are coming to the end... But Such scope for another book??
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 2, 2010 13:35:36 GMT
I think two more paragraphs and I'll be able to post it :-) Not as hot as I thought, I couldn't get the images I had down on paper...but maybe next time!
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Post by joanne on Oct 3, 2010 5:49:24 GMT
Chapter 4 , short, not sweet is now up for comments please
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Hi all , well that's my chapter up. Yes It does stop abruptly, I needed it to be a 'what happens next ending' which I will draw together later. IE I might need to do another 1/2 chapter later.. or maybe not and It will just be resolved in my summing up( most likely) Feedback please... i have the handkies ready 
