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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 1, 2010 12:18:56 GMT
Well there is the start...much more is to come and I hope you enjoy joining her on her journey :-)
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Post by doris on Oct 1, 2010 12:22:03 GMT
sounds brill
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Post by cherie on Oct 1, 2010 14:28:13 GMT
Very cool Michelle! rock on!
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 1, 2010 14:29:34 GMT
Thanks Cherie. I'm working on part 2 right now and hope that you all like it :-)
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Post by joanne on Oct 1, 2010 14:38:53 GMT
if it is anything like part one we will. I need Mia to meet Jacen, accidentally. I think she might go for a walk when Dylan is busy sorting out something for part of her fantasy ( maybe 1/2 way through the week? and see him at his house? Loads of time cos shes still on night one at the mo. Will not cover all the week in as much detail, or i'll be writing it until doomsday
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 1, 2010 14:41:45 GMT
When Mia finds out what's happened in this part I KNOW she'd want to have words with Jacen!! At the end of this part I can free him up and maybe she'll be the first to work out his secret...
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 1, 2010 17:26:34 GMT
Part 2 is ready to be posted but I'm not sure how the end will work with the end of yours Joanne...
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Post by joanne on Oct 1, 2010 17:40:16 GMT
We will sort it.. I'm open to persuasion, as is Mia
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 1, 2010 17:41:24 GMT
Well I'll post it and see what you think change is possible on both sides :-)
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Post by joanne on Oct 1, 2010 17:42:21 GMT
KK
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 2, 2010 6:16:25 GMT
I went to bed baffled by what I was going to do with part 3, well wouldn't you know Jacen came in my dreams and sorted it all out....that was the best dream I had in a LONG time!! Can't wait to see what you guys think
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Post by joanne on Oct 2, 2010 7:50:51 GMT
Put it up!! I'm baking for a swri thing at the moment- why did I agree, I can't bake prettily at ALL. Still will do my best and then back to the stories!! Christophe is going to tell Dylan they are missing....so that will tie in with your bit. Astrid is going to pop her head out to see what's going on..( She won't remember it tho, ....) Its fun doing all this intertwining I think, help me think a bit harder
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 2, 2010 8:01:19 GMT
Well I'll tell you that in this part I'm writing now Anya has thought back to when she told Mia what happened and that Mia had hugged her and sent her off to rest before she started on Jacen so Anya has no clue what he's had to endure from her mum and might not find out til part 4!
Also this will be the hottest part of their story I think...so it might replace your oven to bake those things for you - if I can write it to do it enough justice. It was very hot in my dream!!
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Post by joanne on Oct 2, 2010 8:09:44 GMT
OK, so when Dylan has to tell Mia whats going on-- after all they were rather intimately entwined when he got the emergency bleep, she will tell Anya not to worry, then have a go at J. mmmm I think he might retaliate cos of Dylan, not realising that C had sent D to M? is that followable?
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 2, 2010 8:22:07 GMT
So do you mean J might be having a go at D or M or both of them? Hee hee I like where this is going :-) And Anya is oblivious to it all atm but I'm thinking she might walk in on D&M together at the end of chapter 3 ... not sure yet though.
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Post by joanne on Oct 2, 2010 8:25:44 GMT
well let me know , i've not started ch 3 yet. Though it will start with Dylans bleep going off. Now where can he have it?
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 2, 2010 8:27:13 GMT
It could be in the pocket of his jacket or something so they just hear the bleeping and its disturbing them too much, maybe getting louder with every ring?
oh and as my chapter three covers another night, I guess yours will have to go up first, or at least some of it. Anya's going to a dinner she'll never forget!!
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Post by joanne on Oct 2, 2010 8:27:42 GMT
BTW if I need to know the bit where Mia sent Anya off to rest, shove it through to me so I make sure it ties in well.
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 2, 2010 8:29:41 GMT
She sighed as she thought of the older woman’s expression when she had seen her back in the company of Jacen and like a lost child she had needed the warmth of her mother’s arms to give her the strength to fight back the tears that still held their place in her eyes. “Mum I want to go home…” The confession had been all she could say at first but the confusion at her daughter’s broken spirit had made Mia press the matter further and helplessly Anya had told her everything. Mia’s eyes had flashed with fire, it was no secret where Anya had inherited her own passionate nature from and assured that her mother would deal with him she had been ushered back to her room for some breakfast and rest. Jacen had overstepped the mark and if anyone was going to set him straight Mia would be the one. Anya almost felt pity for what he was going to face. Almost.
That's all I've written about it :-)
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Post by joanne on Oct 2, 2010 8:38:36 GMT
ooh great stuff. Tho i assume she isn't goinh straight homE/ Cos shes no wimp!! And Mia wont let her either. Don't want M or A to find out that C is the boys father tho... not yet!
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 2, 2010 8:53:44 GMT
oh she's deffo not going home yet... Anya is oblivious about Jacen's family and will stay that way til its safe to tell her :-)
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Post by joanne on Oct 2, 2010 8:54:22 GMT
right will try and get it up later today, or the first bit anyway. And no its a 'transistor in his ear... Turned to receive only!!
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 2, 2010 9:18:08 GMT
Okay, just as well its only on receive though :-)
I'm enjoying this so much I don't want to finish part 3 cos then I only have one part left :-(
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 2, 2010 14:03:06 GMT
Anya part 3 is now up! To be concluded.....
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 3, 2010 15:58:23 GMT
And the short part 4 is now up... with more secrets to be revealed!!
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Post by doris on Oct 3, 2010 16:08:53 GMT
Oohhh, very good! But who is Dominic?
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 3, 2010 16:13:09 GMT
That is something you'll find out soon....maybe Anya's not as clearcut as she appears either!
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Post by doris on Oct 3, 2010 16:57:40 GMT
love it
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Post by michelle handyside on Oct 5, 2010 6:55:50 GMT
Anya's next part is up...hope you have fun with it :-)
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Post by doris on Oct 5, 2010 7:03:23 GMT
Ah, so that's Dominic! Brilliantly done Michelle!
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